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Old 01-25-12, 04:37 PM   #1
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Pictures Tree of Life <3

Hai everyone ^-^

want ur feedback again :D
took me one hour to make it , lemme know wot u think :P

http://loly-cool.deviantart.com/art/Tree-of-Life-281411777
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Old 01-25-12, 04:43 PM   #2
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That's really nice, thanks for sharing :)
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Old 01-25-12, 04:46 PM   #3
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It sucks.

ok ok..I was joking. tbh I like it. I find the fetus a bit creepy but other than that it's cool.
(sorry for not giving an artistic critique but that's not my area )
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Old 01-25-12, 04:47 PM   #4
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Brilliant work!
I wish I had just 1% of your talent....
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Old 01-25-12, 04:49 PM   #5
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It's quite different, very good concept. I liked it, hope others do too.
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Old 01-25-12, 04:57 PM   #6
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thank you guys :P

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u freaked me out at first ! but thank you >.< !
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Old 01-25-12, 05:35 PM   #7
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i actually like it. i doubt i would hang it up at the house though because of the fetus... but still pretty cool!
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Old 01-25-12, 05:43 PM   #8
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muah, great concept but you should work a bit more on your technique (to go back to the anoying art critics days), in other words it looks too photoshoped in the sence that too many things look unnatural (perspective and connection points (no real good transition). I like the fetus in the apple though that is brilliantly done. Great work and you should really continue and would love to see the 2.0 version of this in a couple of years. Hope you don't take it too hard but only hearing it's great won't get you further (constructive criticism)

P.S: try to get some lighting effects on it because you have a couple of different light sources that interfere with eachother and create a weird "fakeness
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Old 01-25-12, 05:54 PM   #9
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Thanks alot :P

Alasar !

Thats the kinda criticism i want thank u so much !
ima try my best next time with the lightening and the other stuff coz im rly bad at it >.<
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Old 01-25-12, 06:01 PM   #10
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"All art is quite useless" - Oscar Wilde.
Your art is good but just remember to never listen to what the critics think. Your arts meaning and importance is brought to life by you the artist. I agree with what Alasar but if that's what you're going for then cool :)

If you're simply practicing the art of graphic designing then you're well on your way. I would focus on tying everything together. It doesn't necessarily mean it has to look natural but just well-fitted. It's just like essays. The longer you revise your work the better your work becomes. Keep working on mastering one thing and it will become great!
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Old 01-25-12, 06:20 PM   #11
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thank you ^-^ <3

i agree with u, but im still on my way to master photoshop skills :P
so ima take it step by step x3
and i welcome all kinda criticism as long as it push me to be better ^-^
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Old 01-25-12, 06:23 PM   #12
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Old 01-25-12, 06:32 PM   #13
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your opinion... but she asked how to make it better too dude
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Old 01-25-12, 08:06 PM   #14
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With the tree being alone, it feels like not only the beginnings of a tree, a human yet also everything.. space is also very lonely and the birth of the universe would have been lonelier still. I agree that the lighting needs work also what are the tentacle things coming off the tree?
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