Tree of Life <3

LolyCool · 01-25-12 at 03:37 PM

Hai everyone ^-^

want ur feedback again :D
took me one hour to make it , lemme know wot u think :P

http://loly-cool.deviantart.com/art/Tree-of-Life-281411777

Pavtastic · 01-25-12 at 03:43 PM

That's really nice, thanks for sharing :)

**Method512** · 01-25-12 at 03:46 PM

It sucks.

ok ok..I was joking. tbh I like it. I find the fetus a bit creepy but other than that it's cool.
(sorry for not giving an artistic critique but that's not my area

)

**Gandolph13** · 01-25-12 at 03:47 PM

Brilliant work!
I wish I had just 1% of your talent....

**nekkron** · 01-25-12 at 03:49 PM

It's quite different, very good concept. I liked it, hope others do too.

LolyCool · 01-25-12 at 03:57 PM

thank you guys :P

Method512
u freaked me out at first ! but thank you >.< !

Trireaper · 01-25-12 at 04:35 PM

icwhatyoudidthar

i actually like it. i doubt i would hang it up at the house though because of the fetus... but still pretty cool!

Alasar · 01-25-12 at 04:43 PM

muah, great concept but you should work a bit more on your technique (to go back to the anoying art critics days), in other words it looks too photoshoped in the sence that too many things look unnatural (perspective and connection points (no real good transition). I like the fetus in the apple though that is brilliantly done. Great work and you should really continue and would love to see the 2.0 version of this in a couple of years. Hope you don't take it too hard but only hearing it's great won't get you further (constructive criticism)

P.S: try to get some lighting effects on it because you have a couple of different light sources that interfere with eachother and create a weird "fakeness

LolyCool · 01-25-12 at 04:54 PM

Thanks alot :P

Alasar !

Thats the kinda criticism i want thank u so much !
ima try my best next time with the lightening and the other stuff coz im rly bad at it >.<

**DarnLiina** · 01-25-12 at 05:01 PM

Quote:

"All art is quite useless" - Oscar Wilde.

Your art is good but just remember to never listen to what the critics think. Your arts meaning and importance is brought to life by you the artist. I agree with what Alasar but if that's what you're going for then cool :)

If you're simply practicing the art of graphic designing then you're well on your way. I would focus on tying everything together. It doesn't necessarily mean it has to look natural but just well-fitted. It's just like essays. The longer you revise your work the better your work becomes. Keep working on mastering one thing and it will become great!

LolyCool · 01-25-12 at 05:20 PM

DarnLiina
thank you ^-^ <3

i agree with u, but im still on my way to master photoshop skills :P
so ima take it step by step x3
and i welcome all kinda criticism as long as it push me to be better ^-^

mr.bryce · 01-25-12 at 05:23 PM

repulsive

Trireaper · 01-25-12 at 05:32 PM

Quote: Originally Posted by mr.bryce

repulsive

your opinion... but she asked how to make it better too dude

l1qu1d · 01-25-12 at 07:06 PM

With the tree being alone, it feels like not only the beginnings of a tree, a human yet also everything.. space is also very lonely and the birth of the universe would have been lonelier still. I agree that the lighting needs work also what are the tentacle things coming off the tree?

01-25-12 at 03:43 PM	#2
Pavtastic Apprentice Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: on the edge Posts: 273	That's really nice, thanks for sharing :)

01-25-12 at 03:46 PM	#3
Method512 Is there a character limi Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Jersey (GMT) Posts: 3,302	It sucks. ok ok..I was joking. tbh I like it. I find the fetus a bit creepy but other than that it's cool. (sorry for not giving an artistic critique but that's not my area )

01-25-12 at 03:47 PM	#4
Gandolph13 Legendary Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Australia (GMT+10) Posts: 12,306	Brilliant work! I wish I had just 1% of your talent....

01-25-12 at 03:49 PM	#5
nekkron Apprentice Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Australia Posts: 406	It's quite different, very good concept. I liked it, hope others do too.

01-25-12 at 03:57 PM	#6
LolyCool Newcomer Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: umm let me think !! Posts: 90	thank you guys :P Method512 u freaked me out at first ! but thank you >.< !

01-25-12 at 04:35 PM	#7
Trireaper Apprentice Join Date: Jun 2010 Posts: 362	icwhatyoudidthar i actually like it. i doubt i would hang it up at the house though because of the fetus... but still pretty cool!

01-25-12 at 04:43 PM	#8
Alasar Newcomer Join Date: Jun 2011 Posts: 5	muah, great concept but you should work a bit more on your technique (to go back to the anoying art critics days), in other words it looks too photoshoped in the sence that too many things look unnatural (perspective and connection points (no real good transition). I like the fetus in the apple though that is brilliantly done. Great work and you should really continue and would love to see the 2.0 version of this in a couple of years. Hope you don't take it too hard but only hearing it's great won't get you further (constructive criticism) P.S: try to get some lighting effects on it because you have a couple of different light sources that interfere with eachother and create a weird "fakeness

01-25-12 at 04:54 PM	#9
LolyCool Newcomer Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: umm let me think !! Posts: 90	Thanks alot :P Alasar ! Thats the kinda criticism i want thank u so much ! ima try my best next time with the lightening and the other stuff coz im rly bad at it >.<

01-25-12 at 05:01 PM	#10
DarnLiina Apprentice Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: Colorado, USA Posts: 302	Quote: "All art is quite useless" - Oscar Wilde. Your art is good but just remember to never listen to what the critics think. Your arts meaning and importance is brought to life by you the artist. I agree with what Alasar but if that's what you're going for then cool :) If you're simply practicing the art of graphic designing then you're well on your way. I would focus on tying everything together. It doesn't necessarily mean it has to look natural but just well-fitted. It's just like essays. The longer you revise your work the better your work becomes. Keep working on mastering one thing and it will become great!

01-25-12 at 05:20 PM	#11
LolyCool Newcomer Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: umm let me think !! Posts: 90	DarnLiina thank you ^-^ <3 i agree with u, but im still on my way to master photoshop skills :P so ima take it step by step x3 and i welcome all kinda criticism as long as it push me to be better ^-^

01-25-12 at 05:23 PM	#12
mr.bryce Newcomer Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 1	repulsive

01-25-12 at 05:32 PM	#13
Trireaper Apprentice Join Date: Jun 2010 Posts: 362	Quote: Originally Posted by mr.bryce repulsive your opinion... but she asked how to make it better too dude

01-25-12 at 07:06 PM	#14
l1qu1d Novice Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 166	With the tree being alone, it feels like not only the beginnings of a tree, a human yet also everything.. space is also very lonely and the birth of the universe would have been lonelier still. I agree that the lighting needs work also what are the tentacle things coming off the tree?